Amped
Daniel H. Wilson
Despite being somewhat
disappointed in Robopocalypse, I
decided to give Daniel H. Wilson's novel Amped
a chance, as the premise seemed solid and the narrative structure more
straightforward than in the previous novel. And indeed, Amped does have a blockbuster premise, delivered with Wilson 's obvious
knowledge and enthusiasm: what happens when people can get brain implants to control
certain medical conditions, and how does our attitude change when those same
implants directly impact intellectual abilities? At first, it seems as though Amped will engage these topics in a
meaningful way, given the narrator's first-hand experiences with these
brain-enhancing "amps" and the inclusion of invented primary source
materials (such as excerpts from Supreme Court decisions, legislation, and
speeches); unfortunately, however, it all starts to come apart with Wilson's
inability to effectively juggle thriller-paced plotlines with his intended
level of introspection. Readers are left with a book that sits uncomfortably
between genres: never quite thrilling, but not consistently philosophical
enough to be particularly intellectually engaging. This is a shame; the first
chapters are engrossing and, though they employ some stereotypical clichés,
there is enough inherent promise in the premise to encourage readers along.
After all, there's no need to reinvent the wheel in every novel.
As the book proceeds, however, it
loses sight of its philosophical implications and becomes disjointed in an
apparent attempt to become more action-oriented. Never mind that Wilson , whose narrator is
wonderfully aware of ethical ambiguity early on, drops a bombshell that, while
not unexpected, is never really engaged philosophically. This creates a kind of
abrupt shift in tone and expectations; rather than a thoughtful exploration of
what makes humans, well, human, the
novel is reduced to the level of a brainless shooter. What's worse, Wilson maintains the pretension
of philosophical engagement throughout the book, making the narrator's
occasional intellectual curiosity seem at odds his actions (and, indeed, the
story he's in) and creating a book that's seemingly at war with itself. Thus,
while the faux-historical documentation seemed like an effective way to deal
with necessary and enriching exposition between the first few chapters, it
serves only to break up clumsy, unresolved cliffhangers later in the book. Far
too often, readers leave a chapter with the hero dangling metaphorically on the
ledge of destruction, only to discover a dry (but usually passable enough)
imitation of a news report on the opposing page, dispelling any suspense. To
compound his sins, Wilson
often fails to adequately return to the scene of the action; most of the later
chapters' cliffhangers are resolved off-screen, so to speak, resulting in a
thriller that isn't thrilling at its climax and a philosophical science fiction
novel that refuses to deal with the most interesting implications of its
central technology. In the end, despite a strong premise, an encouraging start,
and a few moments of promise, Amped
falls flat and is ultimately disappointing.
Grade: B-