California
Edan Lepucki
As
a longtime fan of this type of science fiction, I was excited to see
a post-apocalyptic (or, as it turns out, sort of mid-apocalyptic and
dystopian) novel get so much attention from the mainstream press.
Lepucki has an interesting idea in fusing literary fiction's
hyper-awareness of individuals and relationships with genre fiction's
focus on plot, but the novel's great, and to
my mind only,
strengths
lie
in
its science fiction elements and not in the relationships that the
author clearly hopes will come to the fore. With its tight focus on
main characters Cal and Frida, a married couple who have taken to the
wilderness in the wake of a lengthy series of natural and man-made
disasters (more on that below), it is obvious that California
aims to be a close, domestic, literary take on how a
series of unfortunate, quasi-apocalyptic
events
might affect such a pairing. Both Cal and Frida- and, to a lesser,
extent, several of the more important secondary characters- are
provided with sufficient backstory, although these revelations are
often provided at a haphazard pace that diminishes their
effectiveness. Lepucki is also
wise
to present the story in close third-person narration that alternates
between Cal's and Frida's perspectives, although even this cannot
compel the reader to particularly enjoy spending time with either- or
both- of them. There is, of course, nothing wrong with a suitably
gritty antihero or two in a post-apocalyptic narrative; it is,
however, excessively tiresome to encounter a married couple who
continually bicker without bothering to drive the narrative or their
characterizations
forward in any meaningful way.
The
problem with Cal and Frida is neither that they are made of cardboard
nor that they are unrealistic; theirs is certainly not the only
marriage that would fray under the circumstances they face before and
during the course of California's
events.
It is, rather, that they are two
people
who are
simply unable to do anything for
their own good, and who
fail to do so in
ways
that are
miserably boring.
Time and again, each declares their love for the other (whether aloud
or privately) or resolves to begin treating their spouse with respect
(and
each time, invariably, it is about damn time for that);
time and again, they conveniently (and immediately) forget these
proclamations and make the same damn mistakes,
suddenly lacking the keen self-awareness they discovered
equally
suddenly at the end of their previous chapter(s).
Saying that Cal or Frida is adjective
is not, sadly, enough to make them adjective,
particularly when their next actions are very un-adjective
indeed. Compounding this error is that the author appears to think
that this constitutes growth and change; for protagonists in what
purports
to
be a fundamentally domestic story, they are awfully stagnant and
often downright maddening. At the end of the day, Cal and Frida, who
inevitably form the book's backbone, are not drawn well enough to
carry a novel.
California's
protagonist pair isn't helped, either, by writing that is often
clunky and a narrative that itself cannot successfully navigate the
divide between narrow-scope character drama and grandiose
conspiracy theories with their attendant political discourse.
If The Road
(and other books of its ilk) proves that an apocalyptic story needn't
be terribly concerned with the bigger picture, and countless
explosion-laden romps prove that the Michael Bay brand of science
fiction also has a kind of appeal, then California
proves that it requires
a certain kind of precision to
successfully
unite the two, particularly in a novel of relatively limited length.
One gets the feeling that Lepucki cannot quite decide what kind of
book she wants to write, which is a damn shame because she absolutely
nails so many of the genre-heavy points. Her slow-burn apocalypse is
a nice, timely antidote to the asteroids, zombies, and other
sudden
disasters in between that saturate the field; it is a problem of our
own making, in the making, and while one might argue that it is a bit
preachy the argument is made all the stronger by the little details
that make this particular future so terribly plausible- and so
plausibly terrifying.
Lepucki bungles few, if any, of the story's speculative elements and,
even more remarkably, displays a keen understanding of human nature
that is so spectacularly lacking in her treatment of her romantic
leads.
Though Lepucki misunderstands,
over-explains, and just plain gets its wrong with Cal and Frida- both
as a couple and as individuals- she deploys an obvious fascination
with human nature as she explores the causes and ramifications of the
country's eventual, gradual demise. She clearly understands how such
events can give birth to as many types of responses as there are
people involved, and her brief forays into the secondary cast are
usually more compelling, and more realistically portrayed, than her
deep dives into the main characters' minds. The economic moralizing
can come off a bit thick at times, but Lepucki at least has the good
sense to place much of the rhetoric in extremist characters' mouths.
The book also manages a fair amount of tension and a surprisingly
effective balance of plot-heavy moments and more introspective lulls.
Readers want to know more about Cal and Frida's history, more about
Frida's mysterious brother and the Group that captured his attention,
more about those with whom they come into contact in the wilderness,
more about the true nature of the settlements they encounter and hear
about. To a large extent, these questions are answered, usually to a
satisfactory degree, with one blaring, unforgivable exception: the
book's ending is a cheap mess that completely undermines all of its
good worldbuilding and is acceptable, and only barely just, as a
lead-in to a hypothetical sequel.
The
ending, in fact, concentrates so much on plot- the area where Lepucki
deploys her greatest talents- that it is almost unbelievable that she
bungles it so badly. The idea itself is actually somewhat
interesting, steeped in stereotype and lazy expectation as it is. The
problem is that it emerges as though out of nowhere and resolves
nothing, and
the book does not prepare the reader to decide whether they are meant
to accept
or question this seemingly happy ending. One wishes that Lepucki had
simply made up her mind about
this and so many other elements of the book,
as she is clearly capable of writing compelling, probing fiction when
she lets go of her aspirations and simply lets the story flow
naturally, uninhibited by outsize expectations. But, alas, the ending
exhibits
the same fundamental errors that plague the
rest of
the book, caused
largely by a
reliance on overanalysis when the subtle moments are the ones that
truly stand out. In the end, I'm not sure what to think of
California;
despite hating the main characters, I was immediately enthralled by
Lepucki's dire vision of our future and found myself continually
eager to follow them
as
they sought to understand their surroundings and their situation,
understandings
that proved far
more interesting, and rewarding, than any overwrought, hollow
understanding the author thinks that they- or readers- achieved of
themselves.
Grade:
B